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The Column Space's avatar

I Want to Rotate Words,

in all directions

their rhythms, highs and lows

of sweet perfection.

Keir's avatar

My posts on prosody might interest you: https://poemshape.substack.com/

Hauke Hillebrandt's avatar

apparently Faust employs more metrical variations than any other work in german "God speaks in five-stress iambic verse with cross-rhymes; Faust alternates between yearningly flowing four-stress lines, tercets, and unrhymed trimeters; Mephisto's parlando unfolds in the casually cosmopolitan Madrigal verse of varying length: 'I am the spirit that perpetually negates / and rightly so; for all that comes to be / deserves to perish wretchedly; so it were better nothing would begin.' The work is studded with songs, ballads, hymns, and choruses. In Faust the entire formal language of poetry is gathered together. It is truly a Summa Poetica"

The Column Space's avatar

There are also spirits, who speak in lines of 5 syllables, AaaAa, with rhyme in a pattern I cannot discern. See Geister https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/21000/pg21000.txt

Lin's avatar

There is also the anapest (opposite of a dactyl), which is “unstressed unstressed STRESSED”, and that’s how I would scan the heavn’ly line:

Of HEAV | n’ly GRACE (anapest) | and GOD | proCLAIM | ing PEACE

Dactyls and anapests are like poetic analogs to triplets in music, which I think are key because you can’t always break everything in twos. “There ONCE | was a MAN” is an iamb followed by an anapest, for example. Or that Wallace Stevens line:

“COFFee and (dactyl) | Oranges (dactyl) | in a SUN (anapest) | ny CHAIR (iamb)”

Vishal Prasad's avatar

Oh, but Milton in Paradise Lost always uses "heav'n" as a monosyllable.

Lin's avatar

That makes sense haha, since he could write out “heaven” instead of “heav’n.” I wasn’t thinking of the full context. How do you read it out loud? “Heav-ly grace”?